29 August 2026

You can do anything in poetry: On Sonetoismo by Mesándel Virtusio Arguelles, 1


Dahilan (Reason) by Mesándel Virtusio Arguelles (De La Salle University Publishing House, 2026)

 

                                    It wouldn’t be too much to require that before reading Parra one consider the                                                 question Wittgenstein asks of us and himself: Is this hand a hand or is it not a hand? (One should ask the question while looking at one’s hand.)

—Roberto Bolaño, "Eight Seconds with Nicanor Parra," tr. Guillermo Parra


Two poetry collections—Dahilan and Sa Wala Ka Maniwala—were launched last July 30 by De La Salle University (DLSU) Publishing House. They were the last two books to complete the sonnet septology Sonetoismo by Mesándel "Ayer" Virtusio Arguelles. I will write a couple of posts—one each for Books 6 and 7—on this masterful dismantling of the sonnet. 

Looking back at the entire poetry cycle (including its accompanying monograph, "Not the Stuff of Sonnets": Ilang Talâ sa Sonetoismo), published over a span of three years, I find the whole enterprise much more than the sum of its seven volumes. Through the fixed form of the sonnet, the poet wanted to accommodate his ideas about life routines, memories, books, authors, writing, artworks, literary influence, wars, civilization, and other topics that may or may not fall under the rubric "not the stuff of sonnets." Who are we after all to prescribe what the sonnets can and cannot take up as topics? To simplify, Sonetoismo tackled some of the most mundane and some of the most critical subjects of modern life and art. The urgency of its concerns was palpable in its conscious integration of form and content. The poet clearly outlined his intentions in his monograph:

Ito ang pangunahing proyekto sa Sonetoismo, ang lingguwistikong inobasyon at pormal na imbestigasyon sa anyo sa isang buong serye ng sunuran. Ang patuloy na pakikipagbuno sa soneto sa loob ng mga taon, sa palagay ko, ay mahalaga at pangunahing udyok at puwersang nagtulak sa akin upang proyektuhin ang Sonetoismo.

This is the main concern of the Sonetoismo project: linguistic innovation and investigations of form in a series of sonnet sequences. My constant wrangling with the sonnet form over the years, to my mind, has been the central motivation and force that compelled me to undertake the Sonetoismo project.  

In his lecture during the double-book launch at DLSU, Arguelles differentiated between a poetic sequence (sunuran) and series (serye) and gave distinct examples from Philippine poetry. Sonetoismo was governed by a restless reflection on forms and innovation and the constant reaching out for a new and vital kind of poetry. In traversing various sonnet-form variations and diverse subject matter, its original ambition yielded new forms and ways of thinking about what a modern sonnet can do in these interesting times. 

A perfect example of the poet's flair for reinventing the sonnet was "Dahilan," the title poem of Book 6 of Sonetoismo. Reproduced on the page was a photograph of a checklist posted on a wall. The photograph had no caption but its title was listed in the TOC as "Dahilan" (Reason).

r/exIglesiaNiCristo - Tag yourself: I'm code N 

 

The immediate puzzle of this found poem—reproduced without context—was, of course, to decipher what the question behind it was, the answer being any one of these 14 unique codes lines of poetry. Given some of the entries, one would evidently suspect that the matter has to do with attending a church service (pagsamba). It was not until the end of Book 6 that the suspicion was validated by the poet's notes at the end. The piece of paper containing the various reasons was posted on Reddit by a certain Impulsive-Egg-308 in a community group called exIglesiaNiCristo. Figures. 

And since we know the fate of Marcoletaand history always shakes up the foundations of everythingwe should add another line to that found sonnet, making it "a sonnet in excess of a line" (like Allan Popa's poem quoted by Arguelles in "Not the Stuff of Sonnets"):

O:  Incarcerated

Or maybe another code, making this a sonnet with an extra couplet:

               P: Incarcerated, due to one’s own _______

You get the drift.

Elsewhere in Dahilan, we get 14-album discographies of rock bands and pop stars, 14 lines of blurbs the poet wrote for various works by Filipino writers, and, as with previous volumes, sonnets that violate the 14-line rule. This could make us question not only the found-ness of the sonnet but also its pliable form, bendable contents, and provenance.

A clue on how to approach these quasi-sonnets was a poem about a certain infamous Chilean poet. 

Parra

Binasa ko ang mga 
tula ni Nicanor Parra 
hindi para unawain 
ang mga tinawag na 
anti-tula kundi para, 
gaya ng sa simula pa, 
magbasa ng mga tula, 
na sa pagkakataong 
ito, sinulat ng isang 
Parra, at sa sandaling 
ito, dito, sinulat ko.
Kung nababasa mo 
ito, ngayon, ano pa 
ang hinihintay mo?

Parra

I read the 
poetry of Nicanor Parra 
not to understand 
the so-called 
anti-poetry but rather, 
as I have from the start, 
to read poems, 
which, in this 
instance, were written by a 
certain Parra, and which at 
this moment, here, I wrote about.
If you are reading 
this, now, what is it you're 
still waiting for?

The translation lost the compact block form of the sonnet in the original. But here the reader was told not to waste time and go ahead and read Parra's poems, presumably not mainly for their treatment of a movement called anti-poetry but simply to read for the sake of reading. Reading Parra's antipoems would enable us to understand not just his themes but an entirely novel way of thinking about poetry and an idiosyncratic view of it. It was up to the reader to discover in Parra the mechanism behind resistance art and a pragmatic view of poker poetry written with a straight face.

"There's nothing unimpeachable that the sonnet can't impeach," I said in my impressions of books 3 to 5 of the series. Arguelles has shown that the hallowed and longstanding institution of the sonnet, revivified through innovative methods and approaches, would be a credible court in which to hold a trial for all forms of infamy and iniquity, political or otherwise. 

In "Letters from a Poet Who Sleeps in a Chair," Parra shared his antipoetics

Young poets
Say whatever you want
Pick your own style
Too much blood has gone under the bridge
To still believe—I believe—
That there's only one way to cross the road:
You can do anything in poetry.

[tr. David Unger, from Emergency Poems (1972)] 

With creative instinct informing his conceptual writing, Arguelles did to the sonnet what Parra instructed young poets to do. He picked various styles suited to his purpose and explored the powerful possibilities of anything.

 

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In the spirit of Arguelles's Sonetoismo, I want to share these three found poems:

Mga Alyas ng NPA na Binanggit ni Robin Padilla

Ka-Cobra 
Ka-Agila 
Ka-Lawin 
Ka-Tigre 
Ka-Kapre 
Ka-Sirena 
Ka-Adobo 
Ka-Sinigang 
Ka-Pansit 
Ka-Tinola 
Ka-Sili 
Ka-Kamote 
Ka-Bawang 
Ka-Labuyo 

 

 

Benepisyaryo ng Confi Funds ng OVP: Kalahating Soneto

Mary Grace Piattos 
Antonio Pagong 
Timon Andrew Pusa 
Don Piang 
Shane Ngitngit 
Xuniso P. Bela 
May Pamana 


 

Makasaysayang Alyas: Sonetong Lumabis ng Dalawang Linya

Dimasalang 
Siling Labuyo 
Tikbalang 
Taga-Ilog 
Maypagasa 
Buwan 
Magdalo 
Leon Kilat 
Debora 
Lakambini 
Paralitiko 
Dimas 
Alipato 
Liwanag 
Baliti 
Marcial Bonifacio 


28 August 2026

The truth-content of the lie: On The MANIAC by Benjamin Labatut

Note: This is a revised and consolidated version of four posts I wrote last year on Benjamín Labatut’s The MANIAC: 123, 4.

 

Novel-writing, like playing Go, is an art of assembly. The novelist compiles and assembles facts and artifacts. The novel has to be built on strong foundations to produce the proof of concept. Since it’s not erecting an actual building, it has the luxury to bide time and cut corners for the stones to connect later on and to conquer more territory.

Benjamín Labatut’s The MANIAC (Penguin Press, 2023) makes that art of assembly unusually visible. “Lee or The Delusions of Artificial Intelligence” was an extended coda to The MANIAC and a standalone short novel assembled and adapted from news, interviews, documentary film, live streams of the five Go matches including the press conferences, comments by Go fans and veteran players on the YouTube live feeds, illustrated Go match commentaries by veteran players (e.g., Game 3 commentary), science articles, and articles from peer-reviewed journals about AI mastering the game of Go (e.g., Nature 1, Nature 2, Science, Nature 3).

The word “delusions” in the section title was prominent in AlphaGo (2017), a riveting documentary directed by Greg Kohs. The documentary supplied the narrative structure of this section of the novel. In places, this last section of The MANIAC was a reshoot of the documentary. The human interest behind the five Go games—the battle between a human grandmaster and a super-intelligent machine—could match the suspense generated in the AlphaGo documentary, in Kawabata Yasunari’s journalistic account (The Master of Go, translated by Edward G. Seidensticker), and in the 2025 Netflix feature The Match (directed by Kim Hyung-joo).

The question of how fiction assembles reality had already arisen in Labatut’s first book to come out in English, When We Cease to Understand the World (2020, translated from Spanish by Adrian Nathan West). In her review of the book, Ruth Franklin had something to say about the fictionality of the enterprise.

There is liberation in the vision of fiction’s capabilities that emerges here—the sheer cunning with which Labatut embellishes and augments reality, as well as the profound pathos he finds in the stories of these men. But there is also something questionable, even nightmarish, about it. If fiction and fact are indistinguishable in any meaningful way, how are we to find language for those things we know to be true? In the era of fake news, more and more people feel entitled to “make our own reality,” as Karl Rove put it. In the current American political climate, even scientific fact—the very material with which Labatut spins his web—is subject to grossly counter-rational denial. Is it responsible for a fiction writer, or a writer of history, to pay so little attention to the line between the two?

The ceaseless arguments about truth, lies, and fiction were here revived to accommodate the pressures of “the era of fake news.” Labatut may or may not be concerned about the noise in the background. He was after a different cloud of doubt in his second book in English.

Like the first book, The MANIAC was a warning about the destructive effects of Western scientific thought and the latter’s propensity to go in directions that annihilate order in the world. In The MANIAC, the dangers of nuclear physics and artificial intelligence were brewing behind a backdrop of scientists and mathematicians literally going insane as they went about their rational work of plumbing the truths and realities of the universe.

As with When We Cease to Understand the World, W. G. Sebald is a recognizable guardian angel of this book. Beyle, or Love is a Madness Most Discreet was how he titled the first of four parts of his prose work Vertigo (1990, translated by Michael Hulse, 2000). Its opening sentence is: “In mid-May of the year 1800 Napoleon and a force of 36,000 men crossed the Great St Bernard pass, an undertaking that had been regarded until that time as next to impossible.” A glance at the contents of The MANIAC reveals three sections with Sebald-inspired titles: “Paul or The Discovery of the Irrational,” “John or The Mad Dreams of Reason,” and “Lee or The Delusions of Artificial Intelligence.” The opening sentences of the first two sections were patterned after this opening move, showing how Sebald remained a guidepost in the novel’s composition, as he had been in Labatut’s first novel.

One afternoon in the 1840s, as George Boole walked across a field near Doncaster, a thought flashed into his head that he believed was a religious vision. Boole suddenly saw how you could use mathematics to unlock the mysterious processes of human thought. 

The Chilean novelist used the same tricks of the German novelist: extended digressions, serpentine sentences, a chain of ideas and thoughts delivered in manic pace. For good measure, The MANIAC even contained three black and white photographs strategically positioned between its discrete parts, making it a true specimen of photo-embedded fiction.

The same Sebaldian tendency to recast or gloss over factual information—to fictionalize for aesthetic purposes—was amply displayed in Labatut’s novel. The first parts of the novel focused on the mathematician John von Neumann, foregrounding intimations and presentiments about the harm of AI or AGI (artificial general intelligence). The narrative followed a Rashōmonesque style of telling: Neumann’s various acquaintances and family members bore witness about him and the milieu of his time.

The MANIAC of the title was an acronym for an actual computer machine, but it was also implied to be Neumann with his bloated figure and all-caps personality. His photographic memory and monomaniacal intelligence kept him apart from his peers; his morals were suspect. His computational abilities were legendary. Neumann’s mathematical work in game theory and self-replicating machines paved the way for the development of AI machines.

 

I now shudder at the accuracy of some of his prognoses, prophecies that no doubt came from his incredible capacity to process information and to sift the sand of the present through the currents of history. That gave him a certain sense of security, an overconfidence that would no doubt have betrayed a lesser man. But Janos [Neumann] was many moves ahead; he behaved as if he was looking back at things that had already happened.

While AI was often anthropomorphized or personified in this novel (and elsewhere in books and other media), Neumann was here likened to a computer processor or mental machine. The novel tended to depersonify him as an inanimate, intelligent machine: an AI himself. 

The Neumann parts of the novel were almost hagiography, or its inverted sense. They consistently emphasized his outsize influence on the scientific and mathematical problems of his day and of the current era. The MANIAC was essentially a long version of When We Cease to Understand the World: the eco-anxiety in the latter was here transmuted into other chilling ventures of modern science: nuclear arms race, H-bomb, supercomputing, AI. 

* * *

 

He [Paul Ehrenfest] would pour out everything he took in, delighting those around him with fabulous displays of knowledge and his uncanny ability to translate the most complicated ideas into images and metaphors that anyone could understand, threading together concepts from disparate fields that he drew from the ever-growing number of books he fed on with ravenous spongelike intelligence.

Labatut might also be describing how his novels were constructed: a series of associations nested or threaded together. The fictionalized portraits of scientists and mathematicians served the greater (or gruesome) purpose of fiction. To what ends? 

In the first novel, “Heisenberg had glimpsed a dark nucleus at the heart of things.” In the second novel, Ehrenfest's friends (Bohr, Dirac, Pauli, Einstein) admired his intelligence and his deep or overwhelming “desire to understand, to grasp the core of things”:

 

Ehrenfest sought relentlessly what he called der springende Punkt, the leaping point, the heart of the matter, as for him deriving a result by logical means was never enough: “That is like dancing on one leg,” he would say, “when the essence lies in recognizing connections, meanings and associations in every direction.”

Labatut's scientists were always after the elusive kokoro, the heart of things. In the process of trying to grasp the essence or core of things, a paradox opened. How, in our sincere desire to understand the world, we cease to be human. We develop the ineluctable capacity to be cruel to others. 

The MANIAC was bedeviled by something ominous, a specter of evil. Dark forces of history were driving the scientists on the brink of madness. Nazism, according to Ehrenfest in the novel, was “fueled ... by a dark, unconscious impulse that was driving us to a future where our species would have no place, substituted, sooner than later, by something completely monstrous.” That monstrous entity was the architects of the Holocaust and their blind followers. But the novelist was also hinting at a far future menace. AI.

Below is a lateral reading of a passage from the novel and a book on Neumann.

 

Labatut, The MANIAC

William Poundstone, Prisoner’s Dilemma: John von Neumann, Game Theory, and the Puzzle of the Bomb (1993, p. 66, as quoted in musings and rough drafts)

How could such a little country [Hungary]—surrounded as it was by enemies on all sides and torn between rival empires—produce so many extraordinary scientists in so little time?... He believed that our country’s outstanding intellectual achievements were not a product of history or chance, or any kind of government initiative, but due to something stranger and more fundamental: a pressure on the whole society of that part of Central Europe, a subconscious feeling of extreme insecurity in individuals, and the necessity of either producing the unusual or facing extinction.

Stanislaw Ulam recalled that when Von Neumann was asked about this “statistically unlikely” Hungarian phenomenon, Von Neumann “would say that it was a coincidence of some cultural factors which he could not make precise: an external pressure on the whole society of this part of Central Europe, a subconscious feeling of extreme insecurity in individual, and the necessity of producing the unusual or facing extinction.”


I’m not sure if Labatut sourced his information from William Poundstone’s book. The left passage simply reworded the text found in Poundstone’s Prisoner’s Dilemma, except that the speaker on the left was Eugene Wigner while the right was a recollection from Stanislaw Ulam. Nothing earth-shattering so far. Unless one is doing a dissertation or fiercely interested in the subject matter, one does not have the luxury of time to closely read the published biographies and nonfiction—e.g., Turing’s Cathedral by George Dyson and John von Neumann by Norman Macrae—to detect the novel’s deviations from factual information. Contents available online (YouTube) would provide readers a better idea of how the novelist assembled, fictionalized, and stitched together the facts he collected on his subjects. That would make for a more accessible approach to understanding the fictionality of what the novelist called “a work of fiction based on fact.” 

A novel is not fact-checked but truth-checked. There is a difference. 

* * *

 

Seen from the outside, some stories have more truth than others, but the truth value of the story does not depend on its actual truth content. – W. G. Sebald

 

What matters is whether we want to lie or to tell and write the truth, even though it never can be the truth and never is the truth. Throughout my life I have always wanted to tell the truth, even though I now know that it was all a lie. In the end all that matters is the truth-content of the lie.” – Thomas Bernhard

 

Type “John von Neumann” in YouTube and one of the video clips that pop out is his guesting in a 1950s American TV show (link). In The MANIAC, the video clip was described by Klára Dan, Neumann’s second wife.

He [Neumann] had just come home after doing something that was completely unheard of for him: he had appeared on television. It was one of those saccharine programs intended for “young adults,” which I’m sure that nobody ever enjoyed, Youth Wants to Know—it ran on NBC for almost a decade. Government officials, renowned sportsmen, and noted scientists were questioned on subjects of current interest by an eager panel of boys and girls. Johnny was forced to participate as part of a PR campaign set up by the Atomic Energy Commission, and I almost cried with laughter when it aired: in his episode, he is surrounded by a huddle of children dressed in their Sunday best and is interviewed by a chubby blond boy with a buzz cut and a bolo string tie. No more than sixteen years old and already a head taller than my husband, that teenager asks him a series of inane questions—Does the United States have enough educated technicians to operate all the new technologies that are popping up? Are there are [sic] sufficient scholarships for young people?—queries that my Johnny answers with such gentle saintlike patience that you would think he was America’s favorite uncle, all smiles and nods, ambling about with his head weighed down by a massive microphone hung around his neck, as they tour an exhibit inside a nuclear power plant, with the program’s presenter leading him by the arm and pointing out several thick cables on the floor, so that my spouse, who is moving in his usual distracted manner, won’t trip over them as he expounds on the inner workings of Geiger counters, scintillators, and other instruments used to measure radiation, still completely unaware that his own exposure to that very same energy during the atomic tests had already cost him his life. That ridiculous little TV program is the only extant record, the only film of him that exists. How can that be? A genius lowered to the status of a bumbling tour guide. 

In the age of deepfake and hyperdata, everything was verifiable. Truth was a commodity subject to evaluation and fact-checking. Was Klára Dan’s opinion of the “saccharine” TV program Youth Wants to Know her own or was it invented by Labatut? This question could not be verified unless there was a written account about Klára’s views about the TV incident. There was an unpublished autobiography of Klára.

“No more than sixteen years old and already a head taller than my husband,” said Klára in the novel, but in the video one could see Neumann was just the same height as, if not a bit taller than, the boy who asked the question. The taller one was the one behind Neumann. True or false, invented or not, the passage above was telling us more about Klára’s state of mind than about her husband’s: her bitterness at the cause of her husband’s cancer due to radiation exposure.

The method of narrative appropriation, imputing words to historical characters, was central to the artifice of fiction and almost always invited questions on authenticity and ethics. Fiction was aesthetic appropriation and approximation, as Sebald explained. Thomas Bernhard was more succinct and direct: All that matters is the truth-content of the lie. A novel is not fact-checked but truth-checked. 

For Lisbon-based Bernardo Soares, assistant bookkeeper and author of “A Factless Autobiography,” entire passages might contain a few or many lies but still be entirely true. Soares believed in the necessity of lies. According to him, we lie because we are social animals.

 

We make use of lies and fiction to promote understanding among ourselves, something that the truth – personal and incommunicable – could never accomplish.

 

Art lies because it is social. And there are two great forms of art: one that speaks to our deepest soul, the other to our attentive soul. The first is poetry, the second is the novel. The first begins to lie in its very structure; the second in its very intention. One purports to give us the truth through lines that keep strict metres, thus lying against the nature of speech; the other purports to give us the truth by means of a reality that we all know never existed.

If they are at all effective, the truth-content of images in a writing are but a smokescreen of the characters’ inner feelings. They could be evocative because they are accessible by other’s feelings when faced by the same situation, the same dramatic tension.

* * *

The last section of The MANIAC—the five-match duel between Lee Sedol, the South Korean grandmaster and world champion of Go, and AlphaGo, the AI program developed by eventual Nobel Prize laureate Demis Hassabis’s team at Google DeepMind—was a further invitation to truth-checking in fiction. This was a standalone section that rivals the suspense in Kawabata’s The Master of Go, the Japanese novelist’s reportage of a 1938 Go match. Labatut seemed to follow Kawabata’s principle: “Since I was reporting on a match sponsored by a newspaper, I had to arouse interest. A certain amount of embroidering was necessary.” Cross-checking Labatut’s “facts” with the available online materials showed more than “a certain amount” of embroidery. It was almost a reshoot and re-editing of the documentary film AlphaGo on which the Go matches of the whole section were anchored. Labatut’s fictionalized version of Lee vs AlphaGo was a textual documentary spliced from various tweaks of facts and truth-contents of lies.

Go was like breathing to him [Lee Sedol], a process that he could not stop: “I always think about Go. There is a Go board in my head. When I come up with new strategies, I place stones on the board in my head, even when I drink, watch dramas, or play billiards.”

 
The source of the quote was Lee’s 2013 interview in Korea JoonAng Daily.

 

I always think about baduk. There is a baduk board in my head. When I come up with new strategies, I place stones on the board in my head even when I drink, watch dramas or play billiards.

That was practically verbatim, with the word “baduk” replaced by “Go.”

In the novel, an anecdote was told about Lee:

 

“One time, he and I drank together until two in the morning, but after that he invited me back to his house, falling down drunk, to go over a game he had just won, and replayed every stone, white and black, because even though he had won the match, he said there was one move—made by himself!—that he didn’t quite understand,” said Kim Ji-yeong. [emphases added] 

It was basically the same story—with details added (the ones emphasized above)—from a 2016 article in the same Korean daily:

 

“One time, he and I drank together until 2 in the morning, but he went back to a game he had won and repeated every single move because he said there was one move he didn’t understand,” said Kim Ji-yeong, a Baduk TV anchor.

Lee lost to AlphaGo in the first three games. Game 4 proved decisive.

 

[Lee] took longer and longer before each move, cocking his head to one side, as if listening to a far-off rumble that only he could hear. By move 54, Lee’s clock had just 51 minutes left, while AlphaGo’s had 1 hour and 28 minutes of available time. The game inched forward, and just like before, it looked as if Lee was already on the verge of defeat; reporters began to crowd outside the playing room as the rumor that the fourth game would be the shortest of them all began to spread online. Nevertheless, Lee did not react, and played slowly, cautiously, avoiding direct confrontation, giving up almost the entire board to his opponent. “Is he not afraid to die?” Fan Hui wrote in his notes, despairing at Lee’s stubborn refusal to engage with the computer. Fan was so close to him physically that he could almost hear Lee’s thoughts and feel what he was waiting for, and soon he fell into the same trancelike state that had mesmerized the Korean grandmaster. By move 69, Lee was down to just 34 minutes, while his opponent still had over 1 hour and 18 minutes left. [emphasis added]

Labatut made modifications in his retelling of the match by compressing the events and paraphrasing the commentaries. Here’s Fan Hui’s published commentary on Game 4 (pdf):

 

As the game progressed, it seemed to everyone that Lee was once again on the verge of defeat.

 

White played the atari at 56, followed by the hane at 58. When Black ataried at 59, White had the option of linking up the group on the top. See diagram 7. Instead, however, Lee chose to pull out his center stone and extend at 62. With White’s group now isolated and in grave peril, Lee’s heart must have been overwhelmed with emotions. But perhaps he also sensed the long awaited moment at hand.

 

At move 63, Lee Sedol had 42 minutes, AlphaGo 1 hour and 22 minutes.

 

At this point, people suddenly began to congregate near the playing room. The rumor was spreading that the game was about to end, with AlphaGo victorious as expected. But Lee looked cool headed as ever as he played the turn at 68. Was he really not afraid of dying? [emphases added] 

“People” in the commentary became “reporters” in the novel, giving more specificity and concreteness to the scene. “Was he really not afraid of dying?” became the more compact “Is he not afraid to die?” The inspired move that turned things around was move 78. This was Labatut’s version, evoking Maradona’s controversial goal:

 

“The hand of God! That is a divine move!” shouted one of Lee Sedol’s historic rivals, Gu Li, jumping up from his seat in the Chinese webcast. Like a bolt of lightning, Lee’s 78th stone tore AlphaGo’s position apart, striking at the heart of the board with a wedge move unlike anything anyone had seen before. People went wild with excitement. [emphasis added]

This was cribbed from the commentary, with some variations.

 

At last, Lee Sedol launched his attack. Like an earthquake, the wedge at 78 tore apart the cracks in Black’s fortress! None of us had anticipated this. When Gu Li saw White 78 from his broadcasting studio in China, he shouted: “The divine move!” All of Lee’s painstaking preparations were finally about to bear fruit. [emphasis added] 

Labatut’s version captured the essence of what went on, replacing the “earthquake” with “bolt of lightning” and adding to the exclamation of the Chinese commentator Gu Li and other spectators.

 

That would be so cool if it works,” said Chris Garlock, an American commentator, completely stunned. “That is such an exciting move. It’s going to change the whole game,” said his colleague at the DeepMind YouTube feed, Michael Redmond, agog at the potential that Lee Sedol had managed to find inside his opponent’s dominion, at a place where no other Go player in the world would have had the audacity to dive in. [emphases added]

In the actual commentary beginning at around 3:10:21, the sequence of comments made by Michael Redmond and Chris Garlock was reversed, and their comments were shortened and spliced from what were said in the YouTube footage. Here’s the actual exchange in the video:

 

Redmond: This is—. Oh, look at that move. That’s an exciting move. [more comments while demonstrating scenarios and moves on the Go wall board] It’s going to change the equation in this one. [more comments]

 

Garlock: Oh that’s gonna change things.

 

Redmond: Now black cannot escape.

 

Garlock: That would be so cool if it works [more comments]. [emphases added] 

The cut made by the novelist actually followed the one in the documentary film. It’s as if the novel was fictionally building on the documentary’s editing of reality.

In the novel, AlphaGo was awarded an honorary 9 dan certificate after Lee left the stage. In the documentary, Lee was present during the awarding ceremony. Labatut made liberal adjustments to what was said or what actually occurred in the YouTube videos and other sources. He merged dialogues from various sources, supplied a précis or a paraphrase of statements, rearranged the chronology of scenes, shortened or expanded or rephrased and conflated the conversations made by various personalities, compressed time, and mis-attributed statements.

To what ends? Were these deliberate infelicities meant to preserve the momentum of the story and the human interest? For continuity and dramatic tension?

These novel-writing tics were hallmarks of the works of Sebald and (to some extent) Kawabata. Both recreated events in a different plane of reality, with the German novelist bending Pepys’s diary entries to fit his own fiction and the Japanese novelist tinkering with facts to add drama to his reportage. To bravely lie and flout facts: the stuff of true and truthful novels.

Because the truth is incapable of accomplishing social understanding, “Lying is simply the soul’s ideal language.” We’re going back to the ideas put forward by Bernardo Soares, assistant bookkeeper, in The Book of Disquiet.

 

I’ve lied? No, I’ve understood. That lying, except for the childish and spontaneous kind that comes from wanting to be dreaming, is merely the recognition of other people’s real existence and of the need to conform that existence to our own, which cannot be conformed to theirs. Lying is simply the soul’s ideal language. Just as we make use of words, which are sounds articulated in an absurd way, to translate into real language the most private and subtle shifts of our thoughts and emotions (which words on their own would never be able to translate), so we make use of lies and fiction to promote understanding among ourselves, something that the truthpersonal and incommunicablecould never accomplish.

 

Truth-content is personal, after all, and fiction is a vehicle for lies. The novelist can only get away with the hand of God if he assumes the role of the documentary film editor and director. The hand of God is the novelist’s ultimate wedge strike. 

 

 

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Annex: Additional examples of Labatut’s source transformations

From Game 4:

 

When he saw what was happening, Demis Hassabis snuck away from the players’ room as quietly as he could and ran down the stairs, storming into the control room just in time to watch the head programmers huddled in front of a screen, where AlphaGo’s probability of winning had just fallen off a cliff. “Did anything strange happen before it started acting this way?” he [Demis] asked them, and when everyone replied that, just a few moments before Lee Sedol played his wedge move, everything looked normal—hell, better than normal, AlphaGo had been massacring Lee—they had nothing else to do but hunker down and try to contain the sinking feeling in their stomachs, as they realized that their worst fears were now coming true: AlphaGo had become delusional. [emphases added]

In the documentary (after around 1:07:48 timestamp), Demis made the remark, “It looks like it has fallen off a cliff.” In reality, it was David Silver who asked the question made by Demis in the novel. David’s question in the documentary was incomplete, in fact: “Did anything strange happen in the [pause]?

 

“What’s it doing there!” Hassabis screamed as he saw the next move that the computer was considering. 

Demis made a similar remark but he hardly screamed. The scream was the novelist’s touch, given the tense circumstances.

At one point Demis commented in the novel, “It knows it’s made a mistake, but it’s evaluating it the other way. I mean, look! Look! Lee is confused. He’s like, What’s it doing? That’s not an I’m scared look, that’s a What the fuck is it doing? look.”

His actual words in the documentary were not exactly like that (Labatut added a bit here and there) but essentially the same. However, Demis did not utter the fuck word in the documentary. The novelist did. The latter was heightening the frustration of the AI creator about the defeat of AI at the hands of a mortal in a game the machine had supposedly mastered.

In another live feed commentary, Kim Myungwan asked a question (at timestamp 1:59:36): “What’s going on?” The same scene was incorporated in the documentary (1:09:13) but was followed by the remarks Andrew (Myungwan’s partner commentator) made earlier (1:58:00 in the Myungwan commentary). The documentary spliced together the conversations in the Myungwan commentary live feed, maximizing the power of editing afforded this art form. In the novel, Myungwan’s question at 1:59:36 also appeared. It was followed by Andrew’s responses spliced from Myungwan commentary at 1:47:12 and 1:48:12 and combined in the documentary at 1:07:35. The novel made a different response to the question but followed the liberties made by the documentary in re-sequencing the events.

At the blunder made by AlphaGo, the novel quoted a female host from a live broadcast of a South Korean TV station.

 

“Oh, that is ridiculous!” shouted the female host of one of seven South Korean TV stations that were broadcasting the match live. “Is it a mouse mis-click from Aja Huang? No, that’s the move. These are not human moves. It’s inexplicable. Those are mistakes, clear mistakes. For the first time in four matches, we have seen AlphaGo make mistakes. I think Lee Sedol found a chink in its armor. He found the weakness in the system,” she added as everyone watched the champion stare at the board, clearly as confused as everyone else. It took AlphaGo more than twenty moves to recover its sanity, but by then it had completely lost control of the game. [emphases added] 

The quotes were attributed to the female host. In reality, she only uttered the first exclamation (1:09:47 in the documentary). The rest of the statement followed in the documentary but these were not made by the host. They were spliced from statements of the other commentators: Myung-wan, Andrew, and the American commentators Garlock and Redmond. (I was not able to verify who made the statement in the above quote.)

From Game 5:

One commentator in the novel said, “Perhaps this is what 10, or 11, dan play looks like? It [AlphaGo’s move] looks weird, it looks ugly, it just doesn’t make sense to us.” The statements were actually made by another person being interviewed in the documentary. The speaker was different, and the wording was slightly different in the documentary: “This is what 10 or maybe 11-dan play looks like. It looks weird, and we don’t quite understand it.”

In the novel, Lee’s statements during the press conferences following the matches were spliced together from his actual statements during (a) the press conference, (b) the awards ceremony, and (c) his sit-down interviews for the documentary. The novelist sometimes imputed words not said or added flourishes to what were actually uttered. “Mind-blowing game,” Demis would say in the final press conference. “This is the most mind-blowing experience of my life,” the novel would say inside quotations. Garlock made a comment during the press conference that we’ll be talking about these games for years to come. This will be integrated into Demis’s speech during the press conference that the games “will be discussed for a very long time to come.” Demis said in the novel during press conference, “For me it’s the culmination of a twenty-year dream,” but he actually said this in an interview (not press conference), saying instead “For us” and not “For me.” Labatut perhaps used the singular to hark back to the back story on Demis at the beginning of the novel’s coda.


 

 

21 August 2026

Antonio Tabucchi's obituary

Pereira Maintains: A Testimony by Antonio Tabucchi, translated by Patrick Creagh (New Directions Ebook)

 

[T]he fact is that I’ve been stricken with misgiving, what I mean is what if those two youngsters are right? In that case they’re right, said Dr. Cardoso gently, but that’s for History to say, not you, Dr. Pereira. 

What does it mean to be right in the eyes of History? What does it mean to be on the right side of History? Reading online news or watching television in the past few weeks and months, one was bombarded with coverage of the Senate impeachment trial. One saw some senators preening with their twisted ideas, wearing the robes of honorable jurors. One could only wonder if this troupe of senators defending a morally bankrupt public official had any regard for how they would be remembered. Legacy in the wastebasket. One already felt sorry for how harshly history would judge and remember our senators who were luxuriating in the banality of evil. 

Since history (or History) would be the judge and historian of events still unfolding, perhaps the question was wrong in the first place. The question should be, What does it mean to be on the side of the victims of history? 

It was the twenty-fifth of July Nineteen Hundred and Thirty-Eight, and Lisbon was glittering in the azure purity of an Atlantic breeze. Pereira maintains.

"Pereira maintains ... Pereira maintains ... Pereira maintains." It was a predictable repetition across blocks of prose, the pauses in between functioning like the oxygen giving life to the routine details, domestic and work-related, surrounding the later life of cultural editor and ex-journalist Dr. Pereira. The repetition was almost Bernhardian in its shaking insistence, but Antonio Tabucchi used the refrain to remind us of the unified voice behind his narrative and to constantly pull us back into the orbit of "a testimony," the novel's subtitle. It was a recurring phrase that added not only predictability but also ominousness to the entire proceedings.

The inconsistency of having the translation published under different titles and subtitles—Declares Pereira: A True Account (1995), Pereira Declares: A Testimony (1997), Pereira Maintains (2010), and Pereira Maintains: A Testimony (2021)—is a testament to the enduring "afterlife" (after Walter Benjamin) of the English translation. Translator Patrick Creagh—who died in 2012, two years before "Declares" became "Maintains"—must have had a hand in replacing every instance of the word and, in doing so, reinterpreting the entire novel's voice and meaning.

It was 1938, and Pereira maintained that the whole of Lisbon "reeks of death," in fact "the whole of Europe reeks of death." The waiter at the restaurant he frequented would only openly describe what was happening as "barbarous goings-on." 

While neighboring Spain was in the hot seat of simmering political and ideological conflicts, Pereira observed that "even here [in Portugal] things aren’t too rosy, the police have things all their own way, they’re killing people, they ransack people’s houses, there’s censorship, I tell you this is an authoritarian state, the people count for nothing, public opinion counts for nothing."  

And so throughout the novella, Pereira was called to witness and declare his observations of the stifling atmosphere of authoritarianism. He was called to testify and to maintain (if not declare) time and again that his life was lived for a purpose perhaps greater than himself, that he had actively and consciously participated in the course of history too big to contain him. His deposition early in the book—as an initially reluctant observer of "barbarous goings-on"—was hurtling inevitably toward his final act of resistance.

The voice of Dr. Pereira was genial, urbane, a touch too civil and polite and yet nonetheless opinionated. It was a sure voice that could frame contemporary threats with delicate caution at times and indelicate frankness at other times. "I’m not Thomas Mann," he humbly described himself, "I’m only the obscure editor of the culture page of a second-rate evening paper." He was an inconsistent, imperfect, complex human being, which made his final act all the more heroic. 

Pereira did not only maintain what he said. He also preserved documentary materials as evidence. He was finally making a written account of an event that could shape public opinion. But to whom is Dr. Pereira giving his account? To himself? To posterity? To future generations? Whoever it was, as transcribed by Tabucchi and as translated by Creagh, Pereira was giving a written record in style, detectable in the translation as quaint civility and conversational ease. 

Listen Miss Marta, he protested, I am neither one of you nor one of them, I prefer to keep myself to myself, and in any case I don’t know who you and yours are and don’t wish to know, I am a journalist and my job is culture, I have just finished translating a story of Balzac’s and as far as your business is concerned I prefer not to be in the know, I’m not a reporter. 

From a Bartleby who "prefers not to" be in the know, Pereira's life was transformed—we could not say overnight, everything was novelistically calculated in this story. Dr. Pereira did not do things totally contrary to his nature. His objective journalistic truth-telling did not come from a vacuum. We learned that before his current retirement job, he had been a reporter on the crime beat of a major newspaper. Characters and scenes that made him question the status quo early on foreshadowed his unconscious yet gradual reawakening, if not yearning, for a life of principles, ideals, and convictions.

At the outset, we found Dr. Pereira recruiting an obituary writer for the culture section of the newspaper. That's when he became entangled with Monteiro Rossi, a shady young man whose education credentials were suspect (he admitted to having plagiarized his university thesis). The unusual relationship (friendship? acquaintance? father-son figure?) that developed between Pereira and Rossi somehow turned the former from a complacent observer to a half-hearted sympathizer of a revolutionary cause, from a current culture writer back to the journalist he had once been, whose mandate was to bear witness to the facts and describe why an atrocity is an atrocity. From an individualist to a comrade. From a cog in the wheel of history to its direct participant. 

If he couldn’t publish it [a translation of a book by Georges Bernanos] in the Lisboa well never mind, he thought, maybe he could publish it in book form, at least the Portuguese would then have one good book to read, a serious, moral book, one that dealt with fundamental problems, a book that would do a power of good to the consciences of its readers, thought Pereira. 

We have the theme of conscience: how to awaken one in difficult times, in times of crisis. Tabucchi's novella reminded me—mainly in its tone, and also in its theme, though in an inverted sense—of Heinrich Böll's The Lost Honor of Katharina Blum, particularly in its treatment of the ethical dilemmas surrounding the press and its function to tell the objective truth and to stand up against the forces of evil.

At the end of the novel, when Dr. Pereira summarized what happened in a news report, everything clicked into place. What went on up to that point, every harmless detail that went before, seemed like a lengthy digression leading up to his concise report. The entire thing, the entire novella, after all, was an obituary, apart from being a testimony. 

He also said tell Dr. Pereira to write an article about the soul, because that’s something we all need, that’s exactly what he said, Dr. Pereira. Just his little joke, said Pereira, however tomorrow I’ll be talking to him myself.

Albeit irrevocably late, irrecoverably too late, a posthumous article about the soul was sorely needed in these times of moral and political reckoning, when you read the news, you see arrogant senators, world leaders, and authoritarians spouting and commanding, with impunity, unspeakable evil in their words and deeds.

Pereira Maintains was dedicated to the soulless. It was what was needed by everyone still able to distinguish right from wrong and hence able to act. To grow a little soul, grow a little conscience. To recognize and confer dignity on the fallen—that's probably what it means to be on the side of history, to be squarely on the side of the victims of history.  

 




03 July 2026

Yasushi Inoue's chronicle of history

 

Tun-huang by Yasushi Inoue, translated by Jean Oda May, preface by Damion Searls (New York Review Books, 2010) 

 

A view both macroscopic and microscopic emerges in Yasushi Inoue's historical novel of ancient China. Looking from afar, the protagonist Hsing-te sees someone as a “black speck” trailed by a long tail. It is a woman committing suicide.

Then it happened. Hsing-te saw the black speck, which had stood motionless for a while on the wall, suddenly leap off. It dropped beside the wall, trailing a long tail behind it. It was over in a second. There was no reaction in the gathering; no one else seemed to have noticed.

In time, he remembers her up close—her eyes, nose, mouth, and smile—yet always returns to her final act as seen from a great distance, as “that small dot tracing a fine line as it fell to the ground.”

Hsing-te seldom thought of the woman now. It was not that he made an effort to forget her, but somehow as time passed he thought of her less often. It did not mean that his love for the Uighur woman had decreased. He thought of her infrequently, but whenever he did, her image was always clear. In fact, each time it became more vivid. Hsing-te could recall the woman’s eyes, nose, and mouth. He also remembered her complex smile the last time he had seen her—joy, sorrow, and surprise all fused together. And he remembered, with vividness and clarity, that small dot tracing a fine line as it fell to the ground from the wall of Kan-chou.

Elsewhere, Inoue writes of “Turfan soldiers, like little moving dots, covered the plains as far as you could see.” Standing atop a fortress, “People walking about looked as small as peas.” From a window, “a large flock of birds at the edge of the sky migrating to the south like specks of dust.” By the novel’s end, a group of men is described as “walking toward the northern section of the Thousand Buddha Caves resembled ants compared to the scale of the mountain.”

The images of specks, dots, peas, and ants convey the infinitesimally small roles of individuals within the vast expanse of history. History in Tun-huang unfolds at two scales: the intimate world of memory, grief, and daily life, and the vast movements of armies, kingdoms, and civilizations. The shifts in perspective recall Benjamin's old rapport between the microcosm and macrocosm.

* * * 

Damion Searls, in his preface to Inoue's 1959 historical novel Tun-huang, grouped the novelist's fiction into four genres: historical fiction, love stories, postwar sociopolitical fiction, and autobiographical writings. Of these, I've sampled only two. Chronicle of My Mother was a candid autobiographical novel about the novelist's aging mother, and Bullfight was a reportage and commentary about the staging of the sport and its cultural significance in postwar Japan. Both books were reviewed elsewhere in this blog.

Having read Tun-huang late last year, I can now attest to the marvelous prose and generous ideas that inform Inoue's sporadically translated writings. Searls also admitted that these four genres were not mutually exclusive, with certain works overlapping across genres.

Searls quoted a fan letter from Peter Handke to Inoue (dated 1988, published 1992) to illustrate how the Japanese novelist's writings feel lived from within, not described from without, despite the scrupulous research.

The unique thing about your work, for me—and the books of yours I feel closest to are The Roof Tile of Tempyō and Tun-huang—is that every story presents a vision, and that unlike the visions in books by other authors, I can always follow the vision as I’m reading, always believe it; you have lived and felt these images and have the simplest and airiest language for them that I have ever seen. I don’t need to first believe your illuminations, they are simply there in the book, as facts. [italics in the quoted material]

To reinforce Handke's praise, Searls quoted from another story by Inoue rather than from Tun-huang itself, which he posited as perhaps the writer's greatest work in his greatest genre. I would instead highlight passages from the novel that demonstrate this organic beauty and lightness.

He could not tell how much time had passed. His sleep was broken by the plaintive cries of the camels and the whinnying of the horses. The surroundings were so brightly lit up that they seemed dreamlike. It was undoubtedly night, but the bodies of the camels and horses appeared to have caught fire as they stood against the red glare. The resonant, earth-shaking war cries seemed almost hushed in the startling clarity. 

Hsing-te raced up a hill. From that vantage point, he saw a fiery column shoot into the air in the wide plains not far from where he stood. Reflected in its glare was the movement of a large cavalry force. This was unmistakably a battle between the main strength of the two armies, but Hsing-te could only see a small portion of the fighting. The scene reflected in the light was only the orderly advance of the cavalry troops thrusting forward; several units emerged from the darkness one moment, and then sank into the shadows again. 

The protagonist had just awakened from sleep and the flashes of fiery images provided an incomplete picture of the battle. Yet there is enough poetry to allow readers to imagine the violence behind the bloodshed. While crimson was the dominant hue, the play of light and shadows created a dynamic chiaroscuro of war—a cinematic encapsulation of conflict. 

At twilight Hsing-te’s group was inspected. The yellow sun was setting in the west, and everything—the clearing where Hsing-te’s force stood, the city wall, the oasis stretching out east, and the plains in the west—was suffused by the crimson afterglow. To Hsing-te, who had only heard of Li Yüan-hao and now saw him for the first time, the youthful commander seemed magnificent. He appeared to be twenty-four or twenty-five. He was just a shade over five feet tall and slight in build, but he had a stately, imposing bearing. At the same time, bathed by the rays of the setting sun, he appeared to be crimson-colored. 

...

Again Hsing-te was pushed out from the battlefield into a patch of quiet light. The sun shone; there was a hill; the dust billowed upward; and there were clouds in the azure sky. Lines of troops preceded and followed him. But the formation had been reduced, there was only a handful of scattered survivors. Hsing-te could only see a few familiar faces nearby. He tried to find Wang-li, but he could not see him anywhere. As he rode on, Hsing-te looked out toward the plains. There were two battlefields. And in the vast plain, lines of men and horses emerging from the combat crossed and recrossed like silk threads being pulled from a cocoon. The battlefield and lines of horsemen seemed to have a life of their own and did not remain still for a moment.  

The image of warriors and horses crossing and recrossing like cocoon silk threads was astonishing. The novelist did not so much describe the battle but let the silhouettes, colors, and shades of the battlefield speak the unsaid.

Tun-huang reconstructed the chain of events and the human motivations behind concealing a significant trove of cultural and religious artifacts in a cave network in China, discovered in the early twentieth century. Inoue was unable to visit the site of his novel's setting (Kansu Province). His research on the period (the decade following the year 1026) did not yield a historical account. He had to write with the power of imagination, which informed his view of history as a chronicle of human folly and fallibility.

The stunning imagery belied the endless cycle of violence and the natural history of destruction. Humans are dwarfed by history and by the fateful weave of public and private incidents shaping history's nonlinear course.

Much of that effect owes to translator Jean Oda Moy, who took at least 14 years to complete her translation and deserves credit for her clear and dynamic rendering of Inoue’s imagery. Her moving work in Chronicle of My Mother, a novel so far removed in theme from Tun-huang, shows her facility in rendering Inoue’s registers and heart of being (kokoro). 

How does Inoue transcend mere transcription of history? What Walter Benjamin wrote of Johann Peter Hebel might be true of Inoue's work.

When Hebel depicts the passing of fifty years of mourning this way, it almost becomes a lament, but a lament for the way of the world similar to those sometimes found in the opening pages of medieval chronicles. For we do not encounter the attitude of a historian in these lines, but that of a chronicler. The historian limits himself to “world history,” the chronicler recounts the way of the world. 

Inoue's was a lived history. He was not a historical novelist in the sense of putting into words momentous events of history that have already come to pass. He is a chronicler of lived history in the way Walter Benjamin envisioned it, in the sense of incorporating the daily practices and struggles of ordinary life. Benjamin continued:

The [historian] is concerned with the web of events woven from incalculable threads of cause and effect—and all that he has studied or learned is but a tiny nodal point in this net; the [chronicler] is concerned with the minor events, narrowly circumscribed, of his town or region—but for him this is not a fragment or a mere element of the universal, it is rather something other and more. Because in writing his chronicle, the true chronicler also writes a parable of the way of the world. What the town’s local history and the way of the world reflect is the old rapport between the microcosm and macrocosm. 

The everyday practices and rituals bathed in a dazzling chiaroscuro made for a dynamic rendering of human conflict. While Tun-huang concerned itself with the broader 11th century geopolitics in Central and West China and scenes of wars and looting at a time when two warring factions—the Uighurs and the Hsi-hsia—tried to wrest power from each other and rule the land, one cannot help but read, between these reconstructed scenes, the colors of current events. Wars have been ever-present across epochs. While the battle is witnessed up close, the true chronicle ultimately zooms out from that summit to behold the wider drama of human reckoning and futility.

 

Quoted passages of Walter Benjamin were from The Storyteller Essays (New York Review Books, 2019), edited and with an introduction by Samuel Titan, and translated by Tess Lewis.